By Cali Calico
It's a good remake... I can definitely tell you put a lot of thought into it and I'm really thankful you made it.
However... The song's already in English so I don't really understand why you had to change the lyrics. There were a few changes that I thought made it a little better, and you did succeed at making it flow better as one song. But in the process some of the rhythm/rhyme scheme got warped; and a lot of the symbolism was lost.
Finally someone didn't rate one star lol! Using the English version exactly wouldn't sound right because of how the tones and pitches of the Japanese and English language differs. Also I think there are copyright laws to singing the translated original.
By Uncle Tyrone
Good start but some of us really want to the original soundtrack version